It’s two minutes before the end of the day and Zak is counting down the seconds to freedom, because unlike any other kid in his class, Zak hates school. He struggles to fit in and is often last to be chosen for any team. In fact, the only person he has managed to develop a relationship with is Mr. Scott, his hipster bus driver, who always takes up for him when the other students are less than friendly.
But the usual woes won’t plague Zak today. Nope. It’s Wednesday, and his grandmother picks him up on Wednesdays. That means he has nine unsupervised minutes between the ringing of the last bell and grandma’s arrival at the house directly in front of the school.
Today he doesn’t have to form a line and march to the bus. Instead, he gets to leave out the door with the “walkers”. Quickly he scurries along the side of the building to the open lot. There, he hops in a puddle and wonders what stirs in the shallow woods just beyond the fence.
© LaRonda Moore
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Inspired by FFfAW Challenge #100
Photo courtesy of Jessica Haines
Oh, those blissful nine minutes, splashing in puddles and letting his mind wander. A sweet story.
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I know. Sometimes I wish I could get 9 minutes (lol)! Thanks Millie.
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Takes me right back to elementary school years and how lonely it sometimes felt. And that was a long time ago lol so that’s some awesome writing. Really enjoyed it.
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Some memories last longer than others, life is funny like that. I hope that on the days when you felt your loneliest, you too were able to steal 9 minutes :).
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So true. I did! They were precious. Thanks!
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😉
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This is great! I’m reading your recent posts and you’ve gained a new follower.
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Thanks so much Barb. I am now following you as well! Enjoy.
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Loved this. Zak is a resilient mind – holding on to whatever he can grasp. A nice peek into his mind, here, very believable.
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Thanks Russell. You’re right. Zak is resilient and as for his unfriendly classmates, it’s their lost!
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Did he go to see what stirred in the woods? Hopefully not. Cleverly written.
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You know Keith, we don’t know…I hope not as well. Thanks for your thoughts.
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9 minutes is along time in a child’s world – love the way you wrote this!
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You’re right! 9 minutes is a long time, and they can get into all kinds of mischief (lol). I was really trying to capture it from a child’s perspective. Thank you so much for all of your feedback Singledust, I really appreciate it!
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Children have such huge imaginations and sense of wonderment and adventure! I hope he doesn’t get himself in trouble in his quest for adventure! Cute story LaRhonda!
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They do have a sense of wonderment. I am hoping that no trouble comes for Zak in those 9 minutes, only fun and the freedom to be himself :). Thanks for sharing.
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My pleasure!
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Nice. So pleased he has something to look forward to each week, hope that gets him through the tough days.
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Me too, as a former teacher I was thinking about every kid that I have taught like Zak. They pull on your heartstrings. Thanks for the feedback Iain.
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I never knew you were a teacher! I’m literally about to take a CELTA program in two weeks. Also, I totally thought of the “shallow woods” as the bullies, and the fence, his fear or sadness dividing them. The ‘actual’ shallow woods and fence are a ways of diluting the former meaning from his mind for a while. Curiosity of children is always what can help them relax and forget all the BS in their lives. Awesome poem Ronda!
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Congrats on your starting the program. Keep me posted! Wow. Love the metaphor and symbolism that you pulled out of the piece. As you noted, “woods” and “fences” are always good for that. Thanks for lifting that up!
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Will definitely do so 🙂
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Made me smile. How kids find ways to have fun inspite of everything. Great take!
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Won’t they! I’m glad it made you smile.
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