Michael gives his wife one last kiss and heads to check-in. He is about to make his fiftieth company trip, a milestone that comes with a hefty bonus should he land the deal. His presentation is fine tuned, and he is well groomed. This month he is going to Dallas, a four hour train ride away.
As he waits in line his mind immediately drifts to thoughts of Amber. The spicy waitress he met on his first trip there, who kept him company during his downtime. He felt more alive those three days with Amber, then he had that whole year. They dined and danced the nights away. And when he returned home, they maintained their contact via Facebook and the occasional text message.
Once checked in, Michael finds a seat in the lobby area, pulls out his phone, and texts Amber, “I should be there by 4, can’t wait to see you.”
His wife replies, “I’m guessing this wasn’t intended for me…”
© LaRonda Moore
[162 wds]
I love comments and welcome feedback!
Inspired by FFfAW Challenge #103
Photo courtesy of Dawn Miller
Ouch, but then again, he got what he deserved.
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Lol, very much so. Thanks for your thoughts.
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Brief betrayal – Cheeky little twist!
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Thanks Martin! Glad you enjoyed it.
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Ha, ha, nice twist – serves him right!
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Exactly! Thanks for your thoughts.
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Well, well! Some gruelling questions to answer. I hope she grills his toes on a slow-burn till he confesses his philandering ways.
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LMBO!!!! That would be awesome and he would deserve it too!
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🙂
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WOW! loved reading this one 😂
the look on that guys face must be comical ,serves him right …glad he was caught 😊
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Right! Me too. Thanks, I’m glad you enjoyed it. 😁
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Great story…is it bad that I hope he gets his comeuppance?
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LMBO! Not all, me too! Thanks for the feedback Russell.
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There’s no way to untext, he’s gotta spin further stories now. Like, Oh, I meant I’ll CALL YOU at 4, when I get in. Or, I meant, SEE YOU IN 4 DAYS.
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You are correct, you can’t undo a text! Do you think she’ll buy it?
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Intellectually, no. But many people wish to be fooled, so it is sometimes a much easier sell than it should be.
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Sad but so true!!!
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Hehe. This plot does happen in real life. I could actually imagine how flabbergasted the guy might have looked when he realized his mistake.
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Right! Darn, I should have written in him making a noise or a sigh! Thanks for the feedback Mae.
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You’re always welcome!
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Whoopsie! I bet that’s happened a few times. Excellent.
My FFfAW!
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Thanks so much and I bet it does (lol)!
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Wow, plot twist!
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Right! I’m glad you enjoyed!
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Great ending, and very well written!
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Thanks so much, I’m glad you liked it!
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Ouch. Well-crafted story. 🙂
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Thanks so much! I really appreciate the feedback.
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Whoa!! Got caught at the right time huh! 🙂 Good take on the prompt, didnt expect the ending though..
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I know right! Thanks for the feedback, glad you enjoyed it.
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oh he fixed himself up! Loved the build up to the story !
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He was trying to be sneaky and made a rookie mistake…serves him right! Lol.
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CAUGHT! LOL! Serves him right for cheating on his wife! Great story, Ronda!
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Lol – He is busted!!! Thanks for your feedback Joy.
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Yes, he sure is! LOL!
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Ha that’ll teach him. A classic mistake. Nice one 🙂
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Yes!!! Thanks Iain!
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Whoops! Always check who’s the recipient before you hit that send button. Love the twist at the end.
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Right! Thanks so much for your thoughts.
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